Final Animation trial

I did a quick run through animation of what I would to animate as my final piece - It lasts around 17 second and is 190 frames in total. So logically to get my final animation to 30seconds I will need roughly double 190 (380) frames. I will also take more care with lighting, camera movement, prop movement and I'll also try to make the animation more fluid, as well as  end it better and less randomly.  - Also I'll avoid inconsistencies like the reappearing cigarette. The soundtrack consists of recorded sounds of traffic, a door, pouring liquid and dish stacking. The song is a cover of  John Lennon's  "Number9Dream" by my sister, the song of which the book my animation is based on, derived it's title.